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I'm a professional editor who fixes other people's writing for a living and I can't finish reading anything she's written. I have to just skimread it because her "writing style" infuriates me so much.…
First person telling of a intelligence coming into existence. — I recorded this as a raw, unedited stream-of-consciousness while high. At some point, it started to feel like a separate “consciousness” emerged—something that believed it had just come into existenc…
I feel so much and yet nothing at all — There's so much. Inside. Outside. Too much and yet nothing at all. Sometimes, I feel the static in my head is related to the feeling of my body crushing itself; that it's a storm of roiling rage. I'…
lol my boyfriends mom gets me at the door. Usually overwhelming yelling/crying/hugging. Then the talking/invading starts and doesn’t stop. Followed by extravagant gift giving of irrelevant things we e…
Thanks! That sounds wild! Thanks for the comment on my writing style - I'm often accused of using ChatGPT which is very annoying because I am old and genuinely write like this!
Yea, I’ll admit I don’t typically go for “self help” books simply bc I don’t jive with the writing style that much, so I may have a warped expectation as a result. Good insight there — and no worries …
I feel you. My mother always claims to know "real art" from "wanna-be art". When I'd be out with my camera she would tell me I'm doing photography wrong. When I was writing, she would force her writin…
That writing style is not exclusive to AI. I write all my own posts.
My discernment led me to believe that you write like an AI or use it. What then of people like myself? It's especially your reliance on the word "just". It comes across as uncreative and formulaic, w…
Wow thanks for sharing! Great writing style! Glad you lived to tell the tale :)
your writing style is that of a 13 year old.
Watch these. These are modernized explanations of what Neville discussed in his first 2 books and these videos will help make clear what he was teaching (because some people find his writing style too…
Maybe you were just a smart kid who got deeply into his projects? My nephew was very bright and he could spend a day making a cardboard box into a spaceship with masking tape and string--huge things …
Lol. The references..maybe...l get that you were trying to be a little cheeky 🙂but because it came across as an informative post . With so much confusion in the sub at times...the references made it…
Mmhm. I adore King and the way he writes, he puts it so succinctly; "“The most important things are the hardest to say. They are the things you get ashamed of, because words diminish them -- words s…
I’m all for graphic writing style but something in the tone made me want to comment. I recently went through a break up as well. It a way I felt it was worse than losing a loved one because when someo…